Antonio is a very kind, pitiful brother. He cares about Donata and supports her so much. However if I could choose to be any character, I would choose to be Antonio. Several reasons that I chose Antonio is that he cares about everything. When Donata asked about poor people, while they were talking about land animals during tutorial, other brother didn’t care about it, except Antonio. “We should all care,” (p214) than he talked about how poor people helping their noble’s jobs. Mocenigo family makes wool. Although order to make it they need a string and string need sheep’s fur. However poor people are the one who does the hard works, and without the poor people working, Nobles aren’t able to be successful. For another reason why, is that he is proud of his country. “I love Venice, Father…I hold dear the values of the Venetian Empire, and of the city of Venice, and of our own cherished family…That is the life I want, serving however I can.” (p49) he serves for Venice and he also wants to support his own country. For the last reason that I chose Antonio is because, He always helps her sister Donata. “Donatas right” (p138) “As did our sister, she asked the question, after all.” (p144) He really listens to Donata than anybody else and care about what she says. However, if I could choose a character to be, I would choose Antonio as mine.
Thursday, May 13, 2010
If I Could Choose To Be...
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Well Done!! I like your choice of character to be, and the support you gave to your choice. However, why are you using However as part of your topic sentence and conclusion? It isn't being used correctly. See me and I'll explain the use of 'however' to you.
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